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Soccer Shout
May 17th, 2006, 06:08 AM
I would be interested in comments...

The full thing is at:

http://media.libsyn.com/media/soccershout/Tipped_for_the_tipping_point_at_World_Cup_final.do c

And everything else at:

http://soccershout.com
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THE EARS BECOME THE EYES AT WORLD’S SECOND-BIGGEST SPORTING EVENT

** It’s Not What’s Seen Or Reported, But How The Public Is Reacting To What’s Seen Or Reported That Will Make This World Cup Groundbreaking **

Second only to the Olympics in terms of global spectators, the FIFA World Cup is an international phenomena that attracts an audience in excess of one billion people – this year’s event in Germany could prove to be the tipping point for one form broadcasting as fans seek ever more dynamic ways of digesting news and commentary.

While TV and radio networks around the world are shelling out millions of dollars apiece for their country’s broadcast rights, and newspaper organizations are collectively investing millions to send crews to cover the month-long tournament in Germany, it could be the back-bedroom amateur on a shoe-string budget which creates the more memorable reportage this year.

The independent podcast – increasingly popular among the iPod generation – could become one of the media darlings of the year says Soccer Shout, described as the US and Europe’s most prolific independent football (soccer) podcast.

One-part radio phone-in mixed one-part bar room discussion, it is served up – as you like it – through your PC or MP3 player, on demand, when you want it.

Like most of these underground trends, you’re unlikely to know about it until someone tells you; it’s not advertised, that’s not the point. Its audience – like-minded people who have their own views and want to listen to others – grows organically by word of mouth or, more probably, by a link sent to their inbox.

Soccer Shout was established earlier this year by two thirty-something guys, both with a background in IT, but more importantly both with shared fanaticism for their sport – soccer.

One of its co-founders, Phil McThomas, 35, an Englishman now married and living in the US, said: “As is the case with new products or services, they’re often borne out of a need which can’t be fulfilled – you want something, you can’t get it, so you end up doing it yourself.

“Myself and Tony [Wildey, 31, originally from Edinburgh, now living in NYC – the fellow co-founder] were just chatting one night, over a beer, about the lack of soccer coverage in the US, about how, in the UK, there are radio phone-ins dedicated solely to soccer 24 hours a day, and about how soccer fans get their fixes from a variety of media.

“We were bemoaning the scarcity of football podcasts and quickly sketched out the format – a soccer show that involves the listener, one they can listen to where and when they want, and that isn’t subject to the same constraints as traditional media.”

With their technical background, it didn’t take them long to turn the beer mat notes into reality, and they now deliver five shows per week as part of their coverage of the soccer season in England and Scotland.

However, it is the 2006 World Cup, which could elevate Soccer Shout from a part-time hobby into a full-time day job.

The World Cup shows will offer a host of independent contributors from football blogs, other podcasts, to plain old fans, plus an innovative World Cup wall chart that allows listeners to track the competition and run a match prediction competition among friends and colleagues.

Like their successful shows to date, the goal for the World Cup is to provide a platform for the contributors to showcase their talents and in the process create coverage of the tournament that differs from anything else available.

The co-founders are also the presenters and as Tony Wildey admits they expect the fever pitch atmosphere that the World Cup brings will grow listeners and contributors exponentially.

He said: “I don’t think that many people in the US realize the importance of the World Cup – soccer is the world’s most popular game and this tournament is the pinnacle that we see once every four years.

“It will be a media frenzy and we expect the new media strands – in-match web commentary, blogs and podcasting, etc – to hit all-time highs in terms of hits. It will take participation levels to a whole new level, and as we know, once a viral kicks-in and the tipping point is reached, it isn’t easily forgotten.”

Each show delivers a round-up of results, previews, and late-breaking news culled from various news sources; the delivery is informal and chatty with a smattering of humor and cynicism.

With the World Cup in mind, they are opening up the microphone to writers and podcasters who normally dedicate their time to individual club fan sites. Listeners also have a standing invitation to phone-in their comments on a voicemail hotline, which are then spliced into the next show.

“Every team has a number of websites where fans are writing their own articles about what’s going on with their team,” added Wildey. “During the World Cup, they will join the melting pot at Soccer Shout. We already have commitments from several writers, and we’ll be adding more in the coming weeks.”

It is the real, honest fan ingredient which makes it compulsive listening concludes McThomas: “You can’t beat it when you get a call from a supporter at a match, on their way to it, or leaving a stadium for home. Unlike traditional broadcasting which is largely neutral and unbiased, these are from the heart, absolutely partial and often without forethought – audio gold, in fact.

“Whether it’s direct from fans in Germany, or from those watching from bars or the couch, we’re hoping for instant, incisive comments, as well as rational and irrational analysis.”

Although this is the first World Cup to be covered by podcasters, the format is quickly moving into the mainstream. Britain’s BBC already has sport shows available by podcast, while the London Times newspaper is sponsoring two comedians for a series of ten podcasts produced during the tournament.

However, it is in the amateur arena where podcasters could really make big in-roads into traditional media. “Being independent means we can play it fast and loose. We don’t aim to shock – in fact, we consider our show to be kid-friendly,” added McThomas.

“If there’s not much action on a given day, we don’t need to pad our show to a certain number of minutes. If we get a lot of listener voice mail, we can shut up and let the fans talk. And, at the end of the day, if we want a beer during the show, no-one’s going to stop us.”

A podcast is similar to a radio program that is available for download. The audience listens to each show either on a computer or by transferring the show to an MP3 player. Software, such as Apple’s free iTunes program, is available to track a listener’s favorite podcasts, automatically downloading new shows as they become available.

Soccer fans wishing to make their own contribution to Soccer Shout can voice them now and during the World Cup by dialing 206 337 0513 in the US or 0161 660 8331 in the UK. The show can be downloaded free from http://soccershout.com or through iTunes. Email soccershout@gmail.com

ENDS

For Further Information
For interviews or further information, contact Phil McThomas on 001-201-725-6225, or by email - soccershout@gmail.com.

Notes For Editors
Soccer Shout is free-to-air audio program produced by Phil McThomas, 35 and Tony Wildey, 31. Conceived in the middle of a rant about the dearth of soccer podcasts, it goes out every weekday morning – and every day during the World Cup – from an operation in the vicinity of Washington, DC.

Both Phil and Tony are IT professionals with an insatiable appetite for soccer, though Phil is a Middlesbrough supporter and Tony is a Hearts fan.

Barefoot Radio.com
May 17th, 2006, 06:22 AM
Seems well written, but super long for a press release.

thefly
May 17th, 2006, 07:33 AM
It is a bit long for a press release. You don't want to give everythying to them in a press release; only whet their appetite and make them bring you in for an interview. :wink:

This is mine.

http://thinkinganddriving.com/blog/press/

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE

Joel Benge
Email: thinkanddrive@gmail.com
The New Meaning of “Drive Time” Radio

Forest Hill, Maryland. - April 2, 2005
While most of terrestrial radio is stagnating, an intrepid community of developers and content originators are moving ahead with a new, alternative form of radio. That new medium is “Podcasting.” Podcasting, in it’s simplest form is hobbyist audio creators writing, recording, and producing programs and putting them online, for free. There is no broadcasting here. Rather, it is a selective, focused audience; “narrowcasting” if you will.

One of the up-and-comers in this new medium is Joel Benge; a 28 year old Network Security Analyst from Forest Hill, MD. Fed up with the sophomoric humor and stale punch lines found on most corporate radio, Joel took it upon himself to begin recording his own radio program. However, you won’t find this program on any radio dial. His studio consist of his brand-new 2005 Scion xA hatchback and his “soundboard” is a PalmOne Treo650 PDA/Smartphone. His programs are short, to the point, and often biting. Once recorded, with the click of a few buttons, Thinking and Driving, as his program is known, is uploaded to a server in cyberspace where anyone can download and listen to it on their computer or hand-held MP3 player.

“It’s not about throwing your message out into the world and hoping that as many people as possible will catch on.” Joel explains. “This is content created by consumers for consumers. I have a tagline at the beginning of each episode. ‘Where the listeners control the means of production.’ I’m a listener first and foremost.”

It seems to be paying off. Thinking and Driving is downloaded by over 400 people monthly with each episode racking up over 50 “hits” within hours of being uploaded. Quite modest by corporate radio standards, indeed. However, thanks to that meager coverage, Joel’s podcasthas garnered the attention of some pretty high-placed media outlets. His first podcast, the NGR Bugcast, was a featured cover story on The News Journal of Delaware’s Spark Magazine. (March 30th issue) He has been interviewed by successful, pre-Podcasting Internet radio programs like Red Bar Radio (www.redbarradio.com). There is even a mention pending in an upcoming O’Riley Press book on Podcasting.

There are other commute-casters out there as well. Some hail from as far away as Italy and the UK. Benge would like to organize a convention or meet with these podcasters some day, “…to exchange ideas on recording techniques and fuel economy.”

With Podcasting still a fledgling medium and the commercial aspects still uncertain, what future does Benge see for his podcast? “I don’t plan on selling out to Toyota or Exxon Mobile any time soon. My program is just me talking about things that I find genuinely interesting. Of course, I won’t turn down the offer of any gas money.” he grins.

With hundreds of people carpooling with him on a regular basis, that seems fair enough.

For more information on the Thinking and Driving podcast: http://jombe.com
For information on podcasting in general: http://ipodder.org/whatIsPodcasting

Soccer Shout
May 17th, 2006, 08:07 AM
I thought the idea was they cut-and-paste it into their newspaper! :D

It was written by a mate who's been doing marketing for about 15 years, so I let him take the lead. About 2 paragraphs of the 2 pages I wrote made it into the final edit :)

thefly
May 17th, 2006, 08:34 AM
I thought the idea was they cut-and-paste it into their newspaper! :D

It was written by a mate who's been doing marketing for about 15 years, so I let him take the lead. About 2 paragraphs of the 2 pages I wrote made it into the final edit :)

Then you've got to think about the amount of space a newspaper is going to want to invest in what's basically a fluff story. I assume I'm worth a column and a half or a quarter page.

If your marketing guy thinks yours is a good size, who am I to argue? This is just my first crack at it. :wink:

tokies
May 17th, 2006, 09:47 AM
im in the camp of a bit to long, i worked in the publications dept, before. trust me they never read that long unless its from howard stern


ps. GREAT BIT OF WRITING.. wow you kick my butt anyday

fogarty
May 17th, 2006, 01:23 PM
Interesting read, but I agree long. It reads more like a feature than a press release. If it were a press release you would want the first paragraph to get right to the point, rather than lay out the background.

For future press releases (or features) you might also want to consider getting a few quotes in there from listeners. That would make it much more credible and engaging. If you do that, you might even consider just submitting it to some small local papers as a feature. I imagine a lot of the very small papers would appreciate a free article, as long as it didn't sound like PR (and you're already half-way there).

Also, just to be the nitpicky editor: there is a typo in your first paragraph:
It should read: "...the tipping point for one form OF broadcasting as fans seek..."

But hey, excellent idea and great work! I'm convinced the World Cup is going to be huge for you guys :-)

Mignon

obtuseangle
May 19th, 2006, 01:05 PM
Ditto the length comments.

I believe the World Cup would be a phenomenon, singular event, unless you're talking about the history of tournaments as separate events ...

Also, I would be more direct in the title of the release. I get the ears and eyes thing, but it doesn't explicitly tell you what the release is about. And personally I would come right out with the name of your podcast in the first sentence -- don't try to pretend like this is a general release about the wonders of podcasting. If you're trying to promote your show, which you are, don't dance around it. Just make sure you have a common thread throughout about the benefits of podcasts versus other media.

My two cents.

Steve

goliardhk
May 19th, 2006, 07:18 PM
I'm new to podcasting but I have 10 years in PR and writing. You're getting good advice in this thread so far.

The release is certainly much too long - one side of A4 is a good rule of thumb. As someone said, if they're interested, they'll call you for the rest.

Second rule of thumb is that 100% of the key information should be in the title and the first paragraph. That isn't to say you can't have a funky eye-catching title (I like yours) but the first paragraph has to be short but packed. Don't lead with the history of the tournament. Your release isn't about the tournament it's about podcasting (yours in particular) so lead with that.

And you might want to put more of the information in quotes. Some (lesser) publications might just cut and paste so direct quotations are great for them. But even journalists who interview you will often use the quotations direct from your release because real speech is never as tight as what you've honed and written in your release. This is good for you because you can work on putting really focussed quotations in the release.

Good luck!

Soccer Shout
May 22nd, 2006, 12:21 PM
Thanks again.

I'm going to be interviewed on BBC Radio tonight. Sweet!

Dragon
May 22nd, 2006, 01:56 PM
Thanks again.

I'm going to be interviewed on BBC Radio tonight. Sweet!

Nice 1. What time and station....(presumably 5Live at 2am on Up all Njght :roll: )

ElNacho
May 22nd, 2006, 02:55 PM
Thanks again.

I'm going to be interviewed on BBC Radio tonight. Sweet!

kool beans dude

Dragon
May 22nd, 2006, 06:49 PM
Nicely done Phil

Sounded good and the promo was first class. Shame they cut you short. Well done.

Dragon

Soccer Shout
May 22nd, 2006, 08:14 PM
Thanks. I haven't heard it yet! I was putting a show together... :D

I'll post directions on how to find it on the board in case anyone wants to listen.

ElNacho
May 22nd, 2006, 08:38 PM
you know soccer shout...i think it's a bit long.
:P

Dragon
May 23rd, 2006, 04:23 AM
Thanks. I haven't heard it yet! I was putting a show together... :D

I'll post directions on how to find it on the board in case anyone wants to listen.

Click on.. http://www.bbc.co.uk/fivelive/programmes/upallnight.shtml

Under the 'More Coffee' Logo...... then click on Tue and its 1h38m57s in...

1am to 5am, every night of the year
The world's awake so we are too, with live news from across the globe
Listen again to Up All Night: Sun | Mon | Tue | Wed | Thu | Fri | Sat


For a limited time you could just click this link just under the above link....

Listen to the latest Pods and Blogs

Soccer Shout
May 23rd, 2006, 07:29 AM
Cool, thanks.

I wouldn't have figured out how to listen...I was clicking that 'pods and blogs' link but the audio is 2 weeks old.